writing exercise for Kanani

I am participating in a writing exercise today, something like a meme. It is directed by my good friend and Easy Writer Kanani Fong. Here are the rules:

A Writing Exercise. The Long Sentence
You’re going to write for a total of ten minutes straight. No breaks. You’ll write one long sentence, not stopping for punctuation. Do not go back to correct grammar or re-organize sentences. Let the words come forth, just get them down even if the sequence doesn’t make sense. This release will help you relax and get you into the groove of writing.
I’m giving you the first five words:
“The last time I saw ……..”

Ready? Set the timer, now breathe and go!
This was one of the first exercises I ever did, and it led to the writing of this poem.

Remember, you are loved and you are blessed! Breathe and write!

And here is my stuff:

“The last time I saw…” the mountains will not be my last. I became even more convinced that this is not only something I desire but something I need. We did not have the greatest weather, and it didn’t make any difference. The peace was still there, and the silence and the big sky. The clouds passed by in slow motion, some above us and some below. I could see the steam of the clouds slowly taking on new shapes. I can stand there watching clouds for minutes on end, as if there aren’t more important things in the world. There is something timeless about the mountains, something healing, something awesome in the truest sense of the word. This last experience was near Asheville, North Carolina, with the Blue Ridge in full view and in fall splendor. The air was chilly but not cold. Overnight rain had left the valley full of dense cloud below us, with only certain peaks that were high enough popping through. The heat of the morning sun quickly dried that up. leaving a green valley with distant houses and specks of cars that were barely visible. I could hear the rustle of the leaves and the caw of an occasional blackbird. I listened for the wild turkeys I have heard in the area, but was disappointed not to hear any on this trip. They’re probably in hiding with Thanksgiving right around the corner! Ha! Car trips up and down the mountains are very much fun for longtime flatlanders. The roads are windy and single lane in the steepest parts of the mountain close to the cabin where we stayed. Rutted gravel makes the car shimmy and shake and adds to the driving suspense. There was a part near the very top that was so steep the car couldn’t make it except in reverse! But we got up safely and thanked the Lord for surviving and for the adventure. Going down is much easier of course, and allows full enjoyment of the view, especially as some of the trees have lost much of their foliage. Down in the valley, little towns like Old Fort and Black Mountain can take up most of our day if we let them, and we do. It is healing and enriching to lose sense of time for a while, and go where the heart desires, aimlessly and joyfully. We like to have a mission on those days, but never mind if we are distracted over and over again and never quite accomplish what we set out to do, knowing full well it was merely and excuse to get going and a starting point. Back at the mountain cabin, like on most vacations, I try to never miss a sunrise or sunset. Why is that so mystical and serene? Why do I feel connected to all people who have ever roamed the earth when I am watching a sunrise or sunset? I don’t know, but what happens to me is an easy reflection at sunrise about what the day might have in store, and at sunset what the day that just passed was like. Promise and hope in the morning, and a sense of accomplishment and gratitude in the evening. What could be better than that?


6 thoughts on “writing exercise for Kanani”

  1. Why is that so mystical and serene? Why do I feel connected to all people who have ever roamed the earth when I am watching a sunrise or sunset?

    I'd like to know the answer to that too. It feels great doesn't it? Like you just know there is something more powerful than you taking care of it all.

    What could be better than that?

    Not much Ferd… not much.

    Your mountain photo is beautiful!
    .-= dawn´s last blog ..Standing here… =-.

  2. This is wonderful! Wasn't it fun?

    I'm glad you came by and read the article on journaling. I think keeping a journal is a wonderful meditative experience. Oftentimes, I just take notes. Today I went to see a movie called "Yoga Unveiled," and was writing notes in the dark! I would just catch snippets –the most meaningful things.

    Like this:

    "transcendence of the self, wanting to do for society, egolessness"

    Thanks for coming by, and I hope your readers will participate as well!



  3. Dawn~

    Thanks, Dawn! You take the ocean and I'll take the mountains, k?


    Yeah, it was great fun!!

    That's a great tip about taking notes. I can keep them right on my iPhone and journal or post later!


    Hey, thanks for stopping! I'll catch you at your place.

  4. Just a note of thanks for stopping by and leaving a kind word or two. I believe that since the dawn of man, the sunset and sunrise have been significant force to our evoloution and survival.

    I enjoyed your post about the mountains. Nothing can compare to the Applacachian mountains. It is one of my favorite places to go.
    .-= finding pam´s last blog ..Gratitude Post # 15~ My Dogs =-.

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